I will commercially assess your story idea as a pro editor

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Got a great story? This is your chance to have it assessed by an Amazon, International, and USA Today bestselling story developer.

Having a strong outline is the first step to writing a book that sells. This gig includes:

• A story outline template for you to complete, if needed. 

• In-line comments inserted throughout your outline/synopsis.

• A 15 - 45 minute voice recording of summary insights.

Story assessment allows you to:

• Check that your story is commercially viable before you invest in editing.

• Fix big picture issues, reducing your edits down the line.

• Get pro feedback on the idea and story architecture, for a fraction of the cost of a major edit.

Qs answered:

• Commercial viability: Is the premise engaging?

• Character arcs: Is your hero well-formed? Does the external action progress their internal journey?

• Pace & structure: Are scenes/subplots unnecessary; could others be added? Is the story interesting and surprising?

Send me your current outline (synopsis or scene breakdown), or contact me for a template before ordering.

NB: outline assessments are offered for works of fiction and memoir only. If you have a custom word count or request, feel free to contact me.

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