I will give detailed feedback on strories that are 40,000 words.

About:

I will read through your novel, article, or short story to check for both general flow as well as an in-depth and honest critique of how your characters, plot, and story structure develop, plus how effectively you 'show' instead of 'tell.'
This is not an editing gig, but a beta reading. I will not correct typos, but I will mention if there is an abundance of errors. 

I will do both a chapter by chapter analysis, as well as an overall reflection.

This will give you suggestions on what you can fix to bring your manuscript up to a whole new level as well as feedback on what you have accomplished in your story.

I am a native English speaker and book lover who has been publishing, writing, and editing for over five years.
I am a very positive, friendly beta reader who will not only inform you of the modifications that can be changed to make your story better, but also the things that you have done extremely well!
At the end of our experience together, you will feel inspired and empowered to make your story the best it can be. 


All genres and lengths are welcomed! Message me for a custom quote if your story length is not listed or for any questions at all!

Reviews

ndeyelabadens:Great Job!

bdun08:Wonderful buyer!

davealexanian:Her obvious grasp on the skill of writing and the depth in which she delves into the story and characters to give an intelligent review was priceless. Her enthusiasm and insightful suggestions have inspired me anew.

bdun08:Your story is fascinating, complex, and kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading it! I'm so glad my suggestions were helpful to you. I can't wait to read more!

mbroyles2:Wonderful seller. Delivered early and with great detail