I will read up to 80000 words and provide feedback.

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Need help locating the weak points of your story, or figuring out how to crank the emotional impact up to 11?

I will read your story and provide constructive and honest feedback. I will focus on the parts I deem your text's biggest challenges, or please tell me in advance if there is something you want me to pay special attention to.


Amongst the things I can help you with:

• locating plot holes
• evaluating flow and pacing
  
• providing feedback on story structure
• pointing out stilted or on-the-nose dialogue
• identifying inconsistencies in world/setting
• identifying flaws in the realism of your story or world
• discussing characters' arcs/development/depth
• locating places where your structure becomes too visible
• evaluating plot twists (effective? predictable?)
• identifying whether promises made early on are fulfilled by the end
  
• giving my opinion on your beginning and ending
• spotting repetitive words, too long descriptions or "purple prose"

   

If you so wish, I can be a creative sparring partner in the search for satisfying solutions to the problems I locate.

I will read any kind of fantasy (not pure pornography).