I will give general advice, comments, and reactions. A must-have before submitting for publication!

About:

I will read through your fiction of any genre and give you general feedback, such as:

- Does the beginning of the story grab readers?
- Do the main characters have clear personalities, voices, and intentions?
- Does the plot flow well?
- Are there places where the writing is confusing or unclear?
- Constructive honesty about your story in general.

You should NOT expect:
- line-by-line editing of grammar
- changes/decisions to be made for you

The job of a beta reader is to pick up on potential issues with your story before you send it for publication, in order to avoid rejections. I simply offer advice, and you can choose how to change your story. I also offer editing services if you would like more help in depth. I am comfortable beta reading all genres, including erotica and horror. 

Reviews

muddaserb:thank you. very well done.

muddaserb:very well done

muddaserb:very well done. thank you

mbenterprise:great work

muddaserb:great work!