I will beta read your story and give you high level feedback

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So your story or screenplay is 90% of the way there: the content is complete, it's been proofed by a third party, but you have this nagging feeling that something isn't quite working with this character or that plot twist. Sound familiar?

 You need impartial but helpful constructive feedback from a skilled reader who knows your market. 

Well, I'm happy to help! I could brag about my writing and editing credentials here, but instead, I'll say that I have a gift for getting down to the brass tacks of a story, seeing the characters dimensionally, understanding the conflict and tension that go into the alchemic cauldron of excellent storytelling.  

What you'll get: a deep read and high-level notes that reflect what I think you are trying to do and how you can better accomplish your goal. I'll ask questions, offer choices and suggestions, and explain if the style and the story work together or not.

I charge a flat rate of $50 for 50k. 

Writing is not a solo act; it's a collaboration between you, your editor, and ultimately, your readers.  

Reviews

adeimantus:Outstanding reader; highly recommended!

mirandaculp:Great client, easy to work with, big imaginative ideas!

adeimantus:Outstanding reader; highly recommended!

mirandaculp:Great client, easy to work with, big imaginative ideas!

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