I will provide detailed story notes (structure, flow, style, and format) on 120-page screenplay.

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LIMITED TIME BONUS: Orders that are over $50 get my "help you sell your screenplay" gig for free!!!
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Is your script ready? Before you submit to a contest, producer, or an agent, you need to make sure your script represents your best talent. I will provide a professional analysis of your screenplay. This includes notes on plot, structure, characters, dialogue, and format. I will also provide suggestions how to fix any problems. You will also get "sticky notes" (on-the-page notes) to point out any format, grammar, and style issues -- a value of $150. My service is the same you would pay $125+ if you go through a script coverage/notes provider, except that these services do not give on-the-page notes (usually a service that costs $250+).

Every order also includes a script analysis report (pass, consider, recommend) that you can use as a reference (eg, Inktip asks for this for scripts scoring consider or above).

I'm an official consultant for the International Screenwriters' Association (NetworkISA).

Reviews

bladetrix:GREAT EXPERIENCE. And I highly RECOMMEND.

scriptgirl:Great experience.

tomlopy:Wow great analysis.Will use again.

paulrwalker:Pretty good. Covers all the bases well.

tokyosamurai9:Thank you for your good job. Hope to work with you again.