I will provide professional coverage, feedback, on your screenplay

About:

If you're looking to refine your script, move beyond writer's block, or simply get some good feedback, I'm your guy. I've been teaching screenwriting for more than a decade and have helped countless filmmakers with their projects which have screened in festivals around the world. Think of me as a studio reader - professional, confidential, and direct. I have served as reader for state and international film commissions so I know what a professional, produceable script looks like and can help you achieve that.

I will meticulously go through your screenplay and provide feedback on story, structure, character, and dialogue. I will also provide feedback on the nuts and bolts of grammar, spelling, and formatting. I will provide at least 3-4 pages of notes/coverage in addition to a full synopsis for features - other script lengths may vary. I can also provide a scanned, marked-up script as an added service. 

(Please note that I only assess complete screenplays. I don't assess portions of script because of how important it is to have a sense of the entire story.)

Reviews

paulcuneo:Very thorough, thoughtful coverage that will be helpful going forward with future drafts.

geoffsharp4:Great in depth notes. Very helpful and insightful.

bendarkwa:very good review. Really love every bit of it.

raleigh95:Gave very accurate and helpful suggestions to improve on my script! I appreicate his feedback to which I truly needed. Thank you very much on the help and I will come back soon once the script is finished. Thank you very much! :) 10/10 :)

adamharris232:I received really helpful coverage and an all star log line, both of which will help me as I further develop my project. Thanks!! ~adam