I will give you notes for 10 pages of your script in spanish

About:

*** Only to screenplays in Spanish. ***

Writing is a free and almost always solitary task. But if you intend to put your script in the professional hands and aspire to see it produced, it will be useful to have before you with external feedback, which allows you to assess your right guess and identify weak points.

What will I give you?

For a (01) Gig, I will review 10 pages of your script of short or feature film, and I will return it in PDF format, with comments. Confidentiality guaranteed.

- For more pages, you can send me a message and get a personalized offer.

What do the notes usually include?

• Observations
      - Format
      - Style
         - introduction and development of characters
         - presentation of objectives and conflicts
         - description of the action
         - fluency and timeliness of dialogues
         - presentation of subject and environment

• Alerts
      - confusing punctuation or syntax
      - unnecessary repetitions
      - content without audiovisual translation
      - non-structural elements

• Correction of basic aspects
      - spelling mistakes
      - passive voices
      - inadequate tenses

Reviews

yntywanady:very communicative and quick to answer all my questions, will surely work with him again

joaquinnq:Las veces que quieran. Podemos explorar formas de trabajo. Quiero ver ese material producido.

belinice:Muchas gracias Joaquin, por tu trabajo. Gracias a el, he avanzado a la velocidad de la luz en mi proyecto. Jamas, pero jamas, pudiera escribir como tu. Gracias de nuevo. Te envio un cordial saludo. Quedo a tus ordenes.

joaquinnq:Fue un gusto. Hasta una próxima oportunidad...

belinice:Muchas gracias Joaquin por tus comentarios. Muy util fue la contratacion de tus servicios. Altamente recomendado.