I will READ your work and critique: flow, consistency, characters, structure.

About:

CONTACT ME BEFORE ORDERING (projects over 5k words) 

Are you ready for an HONEST BETA READ?

I understand exactly what works and what doesn't.  

Beta readers need to be unbiased, critical, and thorough. 

I am here to help YOU BETA read your work desperately needs. HONEST, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIQUES. Serious writers/authors. If you can not handle honest narrative style critiquing, then I am not for you.  

I will beta read focusing on the following: 

• Opening Line - Does it hook the reader or fall flat? 

• Dialogue - Does it flow or is it overly wordy? 

• Character inconsistencies – Do they all behave like they should or are they chaotic?

• Pacing and Flow – Are you rushing or dragging and where to change?

• Description - Do your descriptions fall short or too long? 

• Repetitions - Are you repurposing? 

• Plot holes – Sound or Loosy-goosy? 

+ Overall critique (narrative style) of your work from the perspective of a reader.
+ This is NOT a grammar edit, spelling or line edit. NO EDITING INVOLVED.
+ Suggestions on how to improve your work.
+ A multi-paged report


Let's GO! 

Reviews

highersights:I love the honesty of the critique! Susan is an amazing beta reader!

kileyphoto:Your stories bring a smile to my face! Always a joy to work with an outstanding young reader writer.

nagia19:ALWAYS great working with her. She doesn't cut corners, or provide any fluff. As a result the writer is stretched to do their best work. Thanks so much!

kileyphoto:Always a pleasure with this return buyer! Looking forward to another project! :)

lblakely2010:I totally love her services and honest feedback. She actually got me to tell my truth and such a way that my readers will understand it. Thanks so much